She’s so beautiful.
But… I dont know.
Something… I feel sad… and helpless,
As if my wings are clipped.
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I feel trapped
In the cage of rationality and objectivity that I seem to have built around myself,
Or rather, has been built around me.
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Even my mind is held hostage.
It tells me she is nothing like I’ve ever seen before
But it also asks me to keep away from her,
For my own interests… and even her interests, it says.
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When the mind disagrees,
The heart aches.
And when that happens,
Everything aches.
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July 29, 2006 at 11:21 pm
Advitiya
Hmm…you’ve got a serious problem here… Love bug..
July 30, 2006 at 9:13 am
ravptor
I like this!
July 30, 2006 at 9:24 am
equilibrium
Ah…..in love eh?
But the poem is good. write more.
July 30, 2006 at 3:16 pm
atlantean
Advitiya and Equilibrium,
It’s not love… yet. I dont even know her name nor did I ever speak to her. :p
Ravi,
Em ra… how are your US preparations?
July 30, 2006 at 3:42 pm
Aftab
Its louuuu
July 30, 2006 at 5:49 pm
Advitiya
Has to be luuv…or perhaps…lust
July 31, 2006 at 12:38 am
Aftab
nah chaitu is a good dude m sure its love..
July 31, 2006 at 1:14 am
ravptor
anna.. luv aa… aat makki!
anna luv lo paddava… panchi pani chestunnnavu…
all the best and i ll call as sson as its not unearthly hour!
July 31, 2006 at 1:38 am
atlantean
Love?!
Stifle your imagination folks.
Lust?
I’d prefer the term hedonistic influences. I’m sure my unconscious is plotting something without the knowledge of my conscious mind (sometimes, you have to give credit to that devilish genius, Sigmund Freud)and I’m happy my conscious has caught the scent
Ravi,
Thanks… yep call me…
July 31, 2006 at 10:35 pm
Fleur
Well let your heart decide if its love or lust….till then why dont u tell who that lady is…maybe we could help…or not..:P
August 1, 2006 at 8:16 pm
Advitiya
Hahahaha…aftab you kid yourself…all men lust after the opposite sex…no matter how sudhra hua they are
August 1, 2006 at 10:58 pm
pranay
Hey man been there felt that. Of course you don’t think it is love, not yet of course you don’t know what it is..Why it is but just can’t help it. good luck man. no one else can save you from it I just wanna say regretting doing something is better than regretting not doing something.
August 2, 2006 at 1:16 am
atlantean
Fleur,
Arre, I dont even know her name. How can I tell you who she is. She’s a classmate, anyway.
Advitiya,
All men lust after the opposite sex. True but why the bias? Dont all women lust after the opposite sex too? :p
Pranay,
“regretting doing something is better than regretting not doing something.”
Yeah but circumspection always pays.
August 15, 2006 at 2:33 pm
Advitiya
Yeah right…cause we have attractive figures and mini skirts to lust after?
September 4, 2006 at 1:00 am
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September 4, 2006 at 1:12 am
atlantean
Advitiya,
How about sinewy bodies huh?
September 4, 2006 at 2:36 am
Advitiya
Not in the same league as a tight t-shirt and a short revealing mini-skirt…
September 4, 2006 at 9:20 am
atlantean
Well well, you lust after tight t-shirts and short revealing mini skirts? :p
We’re talking about what girls lust after. They certainly lust after muscular bodies dont they?
February 28, 2008 at 6:13 am
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